Thursday, January 20, 2005

this is an audio post - click to play

Your voice is mesmerizing-- red-edged anger chillingly controlled. Impeccable diction stabs the air with little hesitation cuts, belied by a cooing calm.

Skoken carefully-- slowly, as one would speak slowly to a child who cannot comprehend the perilous power that mommy has

a mommy who wants to love not hurt, and having a difficult time with that. The couplet rhyme at the end sounds very much like Plath.
All of this magical. Surprising word choices that work, again and again. You are a remarkable writer/reader.
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