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Monday, January 16, 2006

in

there is bed rotation too
many adults and
two children and

too few rooms. A
bedroom door to
memory which

stands ajar only
enough for air flow so
very cold alone – moon-

light none - parents gone
drinking n
nanny a

white bird's nest topped ghost laid out
in the other
bed

room. They both scream mommy it
seems continuously
they both seem to

make the same mistake to crave the
woman who
drove the

screws in who fixed the
iron bar to the
top of

the door so that
it couldn't be
opened

more than a few inches
wide
so

they wouldn't get out. Soon
soon she'll be
back

drunk and
with any luck and
despite heels reach up unhook and

let herself in and by the skin of
their teeth they'll be bidden
their ritual


urination before they
wet themselves where they
have been left lying crying but

is this her their mommy or
their dying nanny or
the ironmonger

come to do the
necessary?

Comments:
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I like the prosody of this, the line & stanza breaks. Also the fact that it straddles the thin line between straight narrative & post-avant. So, congrats.
 
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